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Late (Chap 1)

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So Im bored. Im going to write a story, although Im pretty rubbish so feel free to winceSweating a little....
 I'll just do a taster to see what you think...

Part One (teaser)

Quickly dashing across the road, I checked my watch. Late. Too late.
There was no excuse this time, though saying I was ill was as close 
to the truth as I could say, I'd said it too many times for it to work, 
they already suspected it was just an excuse. This time it would be 
no mere detention, the head of year MUST have been alerted this 
time! Sometimes I wished Jake didn't spend too long briefing me, 
he doesn't have to worry about school, so he doesn't understand 
when I do. And this was the hardest mission I'd had, I didn't want
to miss it just because I was trapped in school, it would cost too 
many lives for just missing three lessons!

(I'll just continue by editing this) Part two

"Tom?"
"here!"
I burst in through the door to form just in time to hear "Kate?" 
shouted by the teacher. "Here!" I replied flustered and out of 
breath, flopping into my seat and letting out an exaggerated sigh.
"And why are you running late again young lady, may I ask?" 
The teacher said. I sweated. I'd spent so much time thinking of
other things I hadn't thought of an excuse, and now I was doing
it again! I could have kicked my self... "I.. uh.." I managed to 
make out just as a loud bang distracted the whole class. Cocky 
snickering echoed down the hall to pair with running footsteps, 
enraging our teacher. I had just managed to get a glimpse, and 
it looked like some poor freshmen, no idea what they were getting
into. Chuckling quietly I settled down in my seat as our teacher ran
after them, red in the face. Pushing away everyones questions I pulled
out my ipod and started to listen to music, completely blissed out with relief.


not much to say, I'll leave to you to tell me what you think...
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Carthaginian
Nice teaser! I really want to hear more!